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PassionatelyRomantic
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0 posted 2004-03-16 10:01 AM


Blind thy tearful eyes,
from beauty I doth lust,
for time doth pass and beauty dies,
and turns to dreadful dust!

Deafen thy longing ear,
of the nightingale's romantic tune,
for darkness thou doth fear,
as darkness comes to soon!

Displace thy tempting lips,
the sensual taste of kiss;
for time is but an eclipse,
and ends such romantic bliss!

Remove not thy love in thy heart,
for thou flowest too well,
and in it thy soul refused to part;
nor whisper of its farewell!


© Copyright 2004 Jared Lee Dudgeon - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-03-16 10:12 PM


Really lovely!

Betty Lou Hebert

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2 posted 2004-03-18 06:18 PM


thank you I'm glad you liked!
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3 posted 2004-03-18 08:37 PM


Jared~

This - 'Displace thy tempting lips,
the sensual taste of kiss;
for time is but an eclipse,
and ends such romantic bliss!'


- is such a lovely romantic passing of thought~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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4 posted 2004-03-18 08:39 PM


Awww Thanks for enjoying it It was a pleasure to write God Bless you!
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5 posted 2004-03-21 08:15 PM


I love the language use here
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