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Brenda Hall
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0 posted 2004-03-12 02:03 AM



ECHOES OF NIGHT

The moon caress the waters calm
Like a sensitive benevolent god
The fog engulfs the rocky coast
And the balmy night warm as toast

Unblinking stars dot the skies
Awaits the dawning of a new day
Sounds of night echo their tune
Knowing another day breaks soon

Sunrise quietly swallows the moon
The fog fades into the morning dew
As Ships in the Harbor set sail
The city bustles and sirens wail

As night engulfs the evening sun
And the moonbeams hover and glow
Ships are anchored at end of day
The echoes of night begin to play

By: Brenda H
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1 posted 2004-03-12 10:48 AM


love the imagery!
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2 posted 2004-03-13 01:49 PM


Brenda:  This is very pretty!  Looks like you and I were both thinking about "echoes".

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3 posted 2004-03-13 08:22 PM


Very nice indeed. hugs, Chris

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4 posted 2004-03-14 07:57 PM


As night engulfs the evening sun
And the moonbeams hover and glow
Ships are anchored at end of day
The echoes of night begin to play

wow awesome rhymes Brendy

-wolf

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5 posted 2004-03-14 09:25 PM


a joy to read ... wonderful writing

If you continue
to think
what you have always thought
you will continue
to get
what you have always got!


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