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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
I only long to be in your arms Snuggled in a warm embrace To feel the tender hint Of your lips upon my brow I only long to be by your side Hold your hand in mine To sit through the night Silently side by side I only long to hear your laughter Share your ups and downs To know that I'm yours And you're mine I only long to be your girl One and only love If ever possible All my life ---------------------- I'm hopelessly in love.. Love MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
sigh.. my poem is so lousy to the extent that nobody even bothers to comment.. well I'll do better next time If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Michelle~ Honey child .. there's NOTHING 'lousy' about this beautiful piece~ 'I'm hopelessly in love..' I *smile* ... if you're 'in love' ... you're NEVER hopeless~ I've been busy doing the grandmother thing, or would have replied sooner ... forgive me ? Of course you do~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear MiCheLLe: I really like your poem and it makes me remember when I was young and newly in love! Sorry it's taken me so long to get in here. The last few days have been really busy ones for me. I see that this has been sitting here for several days with no comments. It's not because your poem lacks a thing, it's just that I guess, people have been busy like me! It's very good! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Lucky you, and your poem is lovely. Joyce |
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