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Blind It With Doubtful Haze

PassionatelyRomantic
Member

since 2004-01-24

Posts 190

0 posted 2004-03-03 01:54 PM

Oh the captured heart does depart,
that plagues thee where it dwell,
dunned in cloaked darkness thy heart-
from the eternal depths of Hell.

Release the demons that possess,
and the spirits you have overwrought;
shower the victim you suppress-
with crimson tears of thought.

Punish him so that he may never be-
and wrap in chains his heart,
so he will never burden beauty,
nor ever in it, be a part.

Part with thee that know not,
that know too much to ponder,
that it is so fair to rot,
'neath the ground you wonder.

And let not this heart gaze,
the wonder of the night;
blind it with doubtful haze,
so in thee it may not delight!

Isobel
Senior Member

since 2004-01-17

Posts 529
Qld, Australia

1 posted 2004-03-07 09:41 AM

I feel a lot of hurt in this write. Thank you for sharing.

Love Isobel

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-03-07 09:42 PM

great rhyming
sad theme
good write

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

3 posted 2004-03-08 07:29 PM

Intense, excellent! Grover.

Insomniac Cat
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since 2003-09-23

Posts 69
The Land of the Dadaists

4 posted 2004-03-09 09:34 AM

Very good! I love the medieval feel of it!

"I am the hobbyhorse. I am the stapler in the mud, the toad in your brain. I am a head full of birds, a future full of apples."

Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

5 posted 2004-05-06 03:34 PM

I read this... and formed a picture in my mind of a gentle man up in a castle tower penning his sad thoughts by candle light.

I have to agree with it sounding midevil. I love it

~BWA~

PatAngel
Member

since 2004-04-05

Posts 451
California

6 posted 2004-05-07 03:09 AM

Sad, yet powerful words. I loved the rhyming, and the way it all seemd to come together.

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

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