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PassionatelyRomantic
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0 posted 2004-02-16 04:45 PM


Beauty grace not,
my weathered face,
but shows her lot,
in Heaven's grace.

The warmth of sun,
I know not of,
but beauty shun,
from up above.

The whisper wind,
grace thee ear none,
but does befriend,
the chosen one.

The waves of sea,
come crashing to,
beach of beauty,
out of my view.

I pray thee not,
pity misfortune,
but love whats not,
beauty outdone.

© Copyright 2004 Jared Lee Dudgeon - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-02-16 05:22 PM


Beautifully penned!
Hugs~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~      
            

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2004-02-16 08:59 PM


Jared~
Just such a lovely read ... you have much talent~
Keep penning~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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midnightblues
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3 posted 2004-02-17 01:23 AM


Dear Jared:

I agree with Marge, u've got it man keep it comin!

Love
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

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4 posted 2004-02-21 04:55 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, love always comes from up above and your heart writes of love in seraphic tone, sweet friend, God Bless You, you have remarkable romantic talent, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jared, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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5 posted 2004-02-22 08:39 PM


thank you for sharing
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