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PassionatelyRomantic
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since 2004-01-24
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0 posted 2004-02-16 04:45 PM


Yesterday night,
Cupid prevailed,
gracing his sight,
his arrow sailed.

Upon the heart,
the arrow struck,
the blood did part,
my heart did buck.

And in that night,
my heart did beat,
gracing my sight,
love did defeat.

In silent air,
love overcame,
and love was declared,
to my dear dame.

And from this night,
from south to north,
love graced my sight,
and shall henceforth.

© Copyright 2004 Jared Lee Dudgeon - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-02-16 05:21 PM


Very beautiful Jared...much enjoyed the read.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~      
            

Beasley
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since 2003-11-28
Posts 682
Cheboygan,MI USA
2 posted 2004-02-16 05:22 PM


You are really romantic! Romantic, you are!
Good job!
Barb

midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
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3 posted 2004-02-17 01:20 AM


cooL! simple words that made me feel much

Love
MiCheLLe


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2004-02-21 04:52 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, and may blessings always kiss your heart in showers of cupid arrows, sweet friend, this is angelic, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jared, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2004-02-22 08:40 PM


big smile
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