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PassionatelyRomantic
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since 2004-01-24
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0 posted 2004-02-16 10:12 AM


My heart knows a place,
of perpetual bliss-
in beauty's embrace,
and in her kiss.

My heart be a fool,
to know such beauty;
that it has no soul,
nor eyes to see.

But be it may,
I know not why,
my heart betray,
my spirit dies.

It longs to know,
that know it not,
beauty of show-
blindness forgot.

Eyes that deceive-
beauty has not,
my heart does grieve,
beauty forgot.

© Copyright 2004 Jared Lee Dudgeon - All Rights Reserved
midnightblues
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1 posted 2004-02-16 11:17 AM


Dear Jared,

I really like your style, you've got a beautiful mindset that inspires me to relate to what you're trying to convey.. thanks for sharing

Love
MiCheLLe


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

Grover
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since 2004-01-27
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London, ON, Canada
2 posted 2004-02-16 03:26 PM


A great poem! Grover.
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2004-02-16 09:00 PM


Jared~
There is a soft beauty to your worded verse~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Rex Allen McCoy
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4 posted 2004-02-17 11:55 AM


enjoyed reading ... I think though, to me, beauty is only one of many bowls. All of which have something worthwhile

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2004-02-21 05:12 PM




(big angel hugs) Oh Jared, as always your words unearth true beauty, sweet friend, that's one example I know beauty exists, God Bless You for being YOU, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jared, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

passing shadows
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6 posted 2004-02-22 08:35 PM


this aches good
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