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brezee Member
since 2003-06-02
Posts 140 |
I like a guy and I don’t know why Never a word spoken between Every mysterious turn of his face Makes you wonder what isn’t seen… Q: What don’t you see? A: Heard he’s a skater That’s pretty cool And look as his eyes They’re shining like a jewel Q: Why change from playful to facial? A: His features mean a lot There is no comparing I guess that explains Why I can’t stop staring Q: What feature? A: The same expression on his face It may not seem like much joy But I know there’s something more To this incredible boy Q: Do you want to find out? A: Maybe I will try and speak to him, Tell him the truth But I think I’ll just sit with a crush As I watch him from a booth Q: Why just sit? A: With him in my mind It’s something I don’t have to tell I can think of him all the time And all is still well… |
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brezee Member
since 2003-06-02
Posts 140 |
i haven't written for a while but this is just recent and it's just another crush/love poem...i wanted it to sorta be like someone asking a question and me answering in rhyme...any suggestions would be appreciated...thanx |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
Sometimes it is easier to sit and keep your feelings to yourself, but let me tell you...years later you'll wish you knew one way or the other if the feelings would be reciprocated... good job |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Nice angle... cute! Grover. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
When this happens, are we inspired with an extravagant love or perhaps just admiration. Talk to him ... any subject eventually will answer your questions  |
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brezee Member
since 2003-06-02
Posts 140 |
Thanx guys for your comments! I'll surely try that...what will it hurt right? thanx again... ~*brezee*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo cute, sweet friend, I love how you put this together, like talking to your heart and letting your conscience be your guide! (sigh) Don't hide the feelings too long for unrequited love is a true killer, let your love be declared, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sweet |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
I like this format. It's cute and creative. Keep up the great work! Lisa ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
LOL, have to share,,,,,In highschool,,,I thought skaters were all burnouts,,,,,so,,,whom do I end up with as the perfect man in my life,,,,,yup, My Mikey was a skater!,,,He still cn tear it up on a board, lol Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
teehee sweet reminisce I like this Love MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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PatAngel Member
since 2004-04-05
Posts 451California |
This is very cute! Patricia 'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go. |
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Sweetest Sorrow X Member
since 2004-01-19
Posts 146From a cradle to a casket |
An intriguing Love Affair... I love it <3 Persephone You better count your lucky stars that everything I wish for..doesnt come true |
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brezee Member
since 2003-06-02
Posts 140 |
lol, thanx guys for all your comments. by the way, i love skaters lol...anyways i have talked to this guy and he's really cool, a really cool friend that is...but yea...i think this poem was the beginning of my learning to write what i really feel and not just what i think others would like...i have written more, but i just have been too busy to post them lately...thanx again... ~*brezee*~ |
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