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PassionatelyRomantic
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0 posted 2004-02-15 02:19 PM


Tho' left unsung thru songs of birds,
my love swears in silent verse,
tho' love remains unheard in sacred words,
the depths of love my heart shall traverse.

Like the silence of dawning sun,
proves to the conquering night-
its unrequited love not yet done,
my heart to her, takes this plight.

To she alone whom this implies,
and to all the best of dark and light,
from northern lights to moon lit skies;
she is my hearts true delight.

From heights of mountains,
to width of all encompassing sea,
from today's forth begins,
my undying pledge to thee.

As long as waves do reach common shore,
and stars light the summer sky,
I swear to her I'll love her more and more-
every coming day, till the day I die.

© Copyright 2004 Jared Lee Dudgeon - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2004-02-15 02:29 PM


I think your love is not unheard at all but very well announced with this poem.  Joyce
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2 posted 2004-02-15 03:09 PM


Jared~
VERY passionately said~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Grover
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3 posted 2004-02-15 04:12 PM


Smooth flowing-- a very good poem! Grover.
midnightblues
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4 posted 2004-02-16 12:35 PM


Jared.. a love that's gloriously romantic is just so liberating!


Love
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

Isobel
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5 posted 2004-02-21 02:56 AM


Undying love.  Such a romantic.  I liked this one.

Isobel


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6 posted 2004-02-21 06:11 PM




(smiles) Your heart is most faithful and I know your love will forever be blessed by the trust you give, sweet friend, may your deserving heart be loved always, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jared, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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