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Isobel
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0 posted 2004-02-12 06:25 AM



We are a family of verse
With words to express
Our feelings and not rehearse
A play that might suppress
The Spirit within

For in 'Passions'
Each of our lives are a matrix
Of past factions
That will affix
All Souls akin

Words so powerful with meaning here
As they come to life with each syllable
Showing what we hold dear
So we are able...
To Imagine.



© Copyright 2004 Elizabeth L. Singh - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-02-12 10:21 AM


The gist of us.  Well said.  Joyce
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2 posted 2004-02-12 01:36 PM


i really liked what you said.i felt it
Grover
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3 posted 2004-02-12 03:46 PM


Very nice work! Grover.
Beasley
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4 posted 2004-02-12 04:58 PM


Yep, there is a bond here. Nice work.
Love, Barb

Isobel
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5 posted 2004-02-13 12:48 PM


Thank you all.  I am glad you all got the gist of it.

Isobel


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6 posted 2004-02-13 01:31 PM


Isobel:  We definitely are like a family, sharing all our emotions in poetry!  Nice poem.

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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7 posted 2004-02-13 03:08 PM


Elizabeth~
Yeppers .... and you're right slap dab in the middle of big time versing FAMILY~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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8 posted 2004-02-13 08:53 PM


Very much enoyed the read...Excellent!
Hugs~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~      
            

Isobel
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9 posted 2004-02-14 02:29 AM


Thank you Betty Lou, Marge and Enchantress for feeling the same way I do.

Love Isobel (Elizabeth)


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10 posted 2004-02-14 03:06 PM


Yes, this is what Passion's is all about. A family of verse indeed. Well done. Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet



    

Isobel
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11 posted 2004-02-15 12:40 PM


Thank you Chris for replying.

Isobel


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12 posted 2004-02-21 04:10 PM




(smiles) Oh Elizabeth, yes, we are all family here on these gorgeous robin-egg blue pages, and you are a talented sister among all of us, yay, God Bless You, this is a gem, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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13 posted 2004-02-22 01:26 AM


Isobel dear... I feel the same

Love
MiCheLLe

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Isobel
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14 posted 2004-02-22 05:04 AM


God Bless You Too Noah Eaton.  Thank you for your kind words.

Love Elizabeth (Isobel)


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15 posted 2004-02-22 05:07 AM


Thank you MiCheLLe for feeling the same way I do.

Love Isobel


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YES
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