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PassionatelyRomantic
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since 2004-01-24
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0 posted 2004-02-03 06:39 PM


My lust is but a divine snowflake,
precariously adrift in perpetuous flight.        
Conducted by Mother Nature's course,
whom makes my world so bright!

[This message has been edited by PassionatelyRomantic (02-03-2004 09:08 PM).]

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Grover
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1 posted 2004-02-03 08:58 PM


Nice poem. Did you spell "percariously" and "pirpetuous" wrong on purpose? Grover.
Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
2 posted 2004-02-04 11:57 PM


perhaps one day it will light upon the eyelash of that special person

paper_cuts_broken_hearts
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3 posted 2004-02-05 05:35 AM


yeah i liked the simplicity of it, but it had depth, very nice write

i very much enjoy reading short stuff like this

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2004-02-05 07:09 AM


Passion and romance..name suits you well!

~ARH
love and hugs

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2004-02-05 03:00 PM


Jared~
You drew the word-imagery perfectly~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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passing shadows
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6 posted 2004-02-22 09:50 PM


nice
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