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PassionatelyRomantic Member
since 2004-01-24
Posts 190 |
Her dazzling eyes are but night's eternity- an infinite array of stars in their prime, arranged in heavenly constellations, perfectly illuminating the void of nighttime. Bound only by the limitations of one's life, one could gaze indefinately into the night, in search for a more heavenly body, that yet remains endlessly out of sight. Yet if you are persistent in your search, and you search the many mile, you are sure to resolve your longing through her innocent smile. Her smile is but the sun's goodbye, amidst the canvas of dark and light, radiating beauty accross the vacant sky, like the wings of an angel in first flight. Her heavenly existance is but autumn's breath, as it wisks away the crimson leaves of time, from rightful bearers-now exposed, 'gainst the harshness of a lover's crime! |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
wonderful love poem with the most amazing imagery !!! this is so beautiful, well written my friend. i enjoyed this one very much and look forward to reading more like this. hugs june x |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
welcom to the corner. This was a sparkler for sure. great images. looking forward to more..  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
very nicely worded ... flows like a artist's creation |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Nice to hear another new voice. Well done. Love, Joyce |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Romantic and so much beautiful imagery! A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
I am new here also. Well done and I am looking forward to reading more of your poetry. Isobel. |
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luvrsheart New Member
since 2004-01-25
Posts 7 |
OK WELL THIS ONE IS THE BEST POEM U HAVE SO FAR. I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT. IT IS BEAUTIFUL. I LOVE THE IMAGE IT CREATES IN MY HEAD WHEN I READ IT. YOU TRULY ARE A POET. P.S. IM NOT SAYIN ALL OF THIS BEACAUSE THE POEM IS WRITTEN FOR ME (HEHE) BUT I REALLY REALLY LIKE IT. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Well penned.  |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Beautifully written, softly it whispers from my lips~ Great poetry! loved it~ One very lucky muse! ~ARH  love and hugs Happy Valentines Day! Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
i too am new here, i really like your poem. i never really got into reading poetry. i just wrote to ease my soul after reading this and several others, i will continue to read poetry, words from the heart,help mend my spirits wings and gives my soul life again. i have found a lot of peace, in all the writers here. i will look for more of yours |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
A well written poem... much enjoyed! Grover. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Her smile is but the sun's goodbye, amidst the canvas of dark and light, radiating beauty accross the vacant sky, like the wings of an angel in first flight."  (big angel hugs) Oh Jared, this is so pretty but sad, sweet friend, your imagery is so heavenly in this write that it bleeds across the whole sky, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jared, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dear Jared: Lovely imagery!  Love MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sweet! |
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