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Brenda Hall
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0 posted 2004-01-29 03:51 PM


God's Gift To Me

It was on a cool Spring day
I came to kneel and to pray
I felt warm sensations, it seems
Or was this feeling only in dreams

God spoke of a future ahead
You deserve a "special" gift,he said
God's promise finally came true
The "special" gift, was you

By: Brenda H
"thepassionatepoet"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

ST. Valentine's Day

Reciting prose and poems so sweet
The soul sings and hearts meet
Searching for perfect words to say
As we celebrate St. Valentine's Day

Hearts and souls play special parts
With tender caresses of two hearts
Finding love is the ultimate goal
While filling the "essence of each soul"

By: Brenda H
"thepassionatepoet"

© Copyright 2004 Brenda Hall - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-01-29 04:02 PM


Now those were just lovely and considering it is Valentine's Day coming up you certainly did a lovely job.

         
~ Blessed Be ~

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2 posted 2004-01-29 06:27 PM


Lovely valentine poetry.  Joyce
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3 posted 2004-01-30 06:47 PM


Two nice poems! Grover.
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4 posted 2004-01-31 05:00 PM


Brenda:  Both poems very nicely done!

Betty Lou Hebert

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5 posted 2004-02-01 11:46 AM


Very nice!
Isobel
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6 posted 2004-02-02 06:24 AM


These two poems are wonderful.

Isobel.


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7 posted 2004-02-02 07:43 PM


very nice thoughts here Brenda ... I remember valentines day as a younster, thinking up special things I'd like to say, but without the nerve to actually say them

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8 posted 2004-02-07 05:04 PM




(smiles) Yay! Awwwwwwww, these both are such romantic gems from your heart, sweet friend, may His gift to you forever shine and give you great happiness, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brenda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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9 posted 2004-02-22 09:29 PM


splendid!
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