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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk 
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Today the sun returned to my sky In a long forgotten splendour of light Presenting me once more, with time Replacing lethargy with lustful fight The light had been stolen callously Darkness swallowed my spirit whole Endless Night without stars or moon Had gripped and held my very soul Time meant nothing but an eternal need To silently implode with my own misery Screaming inside, but to others it seemed I languished in a bland kind of apathy Then the sun returned to greet me today Painting colours so bright it hurt my eyes Furnishing my world with time once again Hope fluttered inside like lost butterflies Night shares its place once more with the day My spirit, once weary embraces the light The embers of depression are dying away Cooled by the wings of my soul in flight |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
June, I really needed to read this today. I think this is outstanding writing, so full of true emotions. Hugs. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I surely hope your sun is back to stay. Very intense and well done. Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
junemac: We definitely need sunshine in our lives! It's hard to stay upbeat during all the gray days of winter. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
dear gentle spirit thank you, i am glad this one helped a little hugs from june xxxxxxxx |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
Thank you Joyce, I am hoping so too as i am a naturally positive and happy person and it was hard to deal with. hugs from june xxxxxxx |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
Hello Betty lou, This time last year i was in a terrrible state and i am glad to say that i feel lots better now. Poetry was the most positive thing that came from my depression as i first began writing as a let out for my emotions. hugs from june xxxxxxxxxx |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
This is a very nice expressive poem. I am glad you are feeling better. It's good to bring depression out because many people do not understand the depth of despair. I wish you well. Barb |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I do that every now and then...wonderful feeling |
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