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Isobel
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0 posted 2004-01-21 04:24 AM


This is a poem that I wrote last year when I was feeling sorry for myself.I would still like to share it with everyone.


Any Time For me?


There is a quickening in this race,
Watching people rush and fasten their pace.
Time passes with their vision blurred,
It's a time gone error that has occurred.
So why measure time, when I can see,
Nobody has time...any time for me.
Everyday I wait and I pray,
Hoping someone will come my way.
Why doesn't anybody stop and care,
You don't have to find time, it's always there.
When my life's journey is at an end,
Cry not for the time we did not spend.
For the time you had and thought you had not,
Was there all the time, you just forgot.


© Copyright 2004 Elizabeth L. Singh - All Rights Reserved
Susan Caldwell
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1 posted 2004-01-21 08:34 AM


We have all had times like this...

"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.."
~Dido~

Beasley
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2 posted 2004-01-21 09:37 AM


I'm very glad that you did share this poem.
All of us have had times like this, but somehow down the road, you'll be able to reach out to someone because you've been there-and I am sure you will because your poem shows sensitivity.
Barb

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3 posted 2004-01-21 01:55 PM


The lonliness comes through in this.  Joyce
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4 posted 2004-01-21 05:48 PM


Isobel:  An impressive write! I'm glad you posted it.  I'm sure many of us who read it can relate to your feelings.

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Copperbell
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since 2003-11-08
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5 posted 2004-01-26 10:22 AM


You've definately reminded me to make sure I spend that time with my loved ones...the busyness so easily can take over.

I hope you've been able to spend more with yours...

Isobel
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6 posted 2004-01-27 02:17 AM


Copperbell

Life is so short, so I am so glad that you have come to realise through my poem, that you need to spend more time with your family.

Isobel


passing shadows
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7 posted 2004-02-22 10:21 PM


reminds me of one I wrote called What I Needed Most

about time not given

Isobel
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Qld, Australia
8 posted 2004-02-23 01:44 AM



Thank you all once again for your kind comments.  I am not lonely anymore.  Since I have come to Passions, I feel part of a loving 'Family'.

Passing Shadows, I would love to read your poem "What I Needed Most".  Could you post that one again, please.

Love Isobel


midnightblues
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9 posted 2004-02-24 12:52 PM


Isobel I feel it too...

Love
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

Isobel
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Qld, Australia
10 posted 2004-02-27 09:21 AM


I'm glad you do feel it MiCheLLe.  It is the people who don't feel it, that are rushing around oblivious to another persons needs etc.

Love Isobel


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11 posted 2004-02-28 02:56 PM




(big angel hugs) We all move too quickly in life indeed, and I truly believe it is our job to tell our loved ones to slow down so we can all be on the same page and not lose one another and feel close and secure! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, there is always time for you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Isobel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Isobel
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Qld, Australia
12 posted 2004-02-29 07:49 AM


Dear Noah

Most people don't know what is missing in their life until it is gone.  I pray when people read this poem of mine that they see more of their loved ones and friends.

I feel that love emanates through each and everyone here in Passions.  Where time is not forgotten.

God Bless You Noah Eaton

Love Isobel


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