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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
Song of the Heart! The heart sings a song To its own rhythmic tune, Beating a message so strong With a vibration of boon! So heart of mine plays our music Keeping us from missing a beat, For a heart that has no lyric, It’s the heart that has found defeat |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
A song in the heart really does create joy, and regarding love it does keep us focused on that love. Your poem reminds me to not complain and grouch - something I need to do less of. Thanks for sharing. |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Isobel: I love the title of this poem and the content. Life certaianly is much happier if we can keep a song in our heart! Best wishes Trillium Betty Lou Hebert |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
this is such a lovely way to think and such a nice way of expresing love. enjoyed it very much !!! hugs from june xxxxxxxxx |
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Shereen Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 57Michigan, USA |
This was truly enjoyable. I especially liked the implication that one heart can hold the "tune" of two when the other is not always up to it. Ah, such is love! Good job again! Shereen. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that would be mine |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
Thank you each and everyone of you. We must be all in 'TUNE'. Love Isobel |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Wow Isobel, this is very nice! and I must agree with this: For a heart that has no lyric, It’s the heart that has found defeat Love MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
Dear MiCheLLe I did not think that this message got through so I sent another one. Love Isobel |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
Thanks MiCheLLe Our hearts are beating the same tune. Love Isobel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Always hold that song true to your heart and sing-along each moment and every step you take, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Isobel, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
Thank you Noah for showing me your beautiful heart. God Bless You too. Love Isobel |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I like this very much, it has such joy. If I were to comment on anything negative it would only be to say Ithe last line would flow on more if you had 'is' instead of 'it's'. Lovely poem. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
Very nice Poem! Good job! Love, Barb |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Isobel~ This is a beauty~ My dear friend .... now get in here and sing us another~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
Dear Kethry Your viewpoint is a positive one. Thank you so much. I will change It's to Is. Love Isobel ox |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
Dear Kethry I tried changing It's to Is and it won't allow it. Love Isobel ox |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
Thank you Barb and Marge for your lovely comments. Love Isobel ox |
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