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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2004-01-03 05:20 PM


Surprise for Susie

I found her in the summertime.
There's no way for me to know
If 'til this morning's big surprise
She had ever before seen snow.

Sniffing it out so carefully
Testing thoroughly with her nose,
She winced at the cold feel of it
And danced daintily on her toes.

She didn't stay out very long,
Turning 'round and coming back in;
Then recognizing the wonder
She wanted to go out again.

She grabbed up her new Christmas toy
Expecting a fast game of throw,
Not knowing I'm a hot-house flower
Who would turn to ice in the snow.

So Susie dear, you're on your own;
Go out to play and just make do.
When sun is warm and grasses green,
I'll have that game of catch with you!

By: Joyce 01/03/04

© Copyright 2004 Joyce I Johnson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-01-03 05:27 PM


this made me smile....could a poet hope for more...aye tis a great pen.
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2 posted 2004-01-03 07:28 PM


Joyce:  This is cute!  I remember the first time our chocolate Lab saw snow. He didn't like it at all.  Now that he's an adult dog, he loves it and plows through it, the deeper the better!  We have about 20 inches right now. Happy New Year!

Betty Lou Hebert

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3 posted 2004-01-05 04:01 AM


this is cute
ellie LeJeune
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4 posted 2004-01-05 08:13 PM


Hi Joyce; Youe poetry is always beautiful and paints a picture so real! Hugs, ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Shereen
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5 posted 2004-01-05 11:04 PM


My Joyce, it is so good to be able to read your lovely words once again!  It is truly a coming home for me.  Well done - as usual.
Shereen.

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6 posted 2004-01-06 02:10 AM


How nice to hear from you Ellie.  It has been a while.
Joyce Johnson
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7 posted 2004-01-06 02:11 AM


Shereen what a lovely surprise.  I feel I have come full circle.  Welcome to our corner.  Love, Joyce
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8 posted 2004-01-06 08:23 AM


Thank you, my Joyce.  It's nice to share this with you again!
Shereen.

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