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IndigoEve Member
since 2003-01-10
Posts 279Etched in the illusion of time 
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To Whom It May Concern: I envy the artist, who sees the meticulous lines etched into a butterfly's wing, forged by nature's spun glass fingers, hidden. A breathless task is undertaken by them to recreate and manipulate colors, just so. Their hands, their rough, beautiful hands, feel things as if the canvas was bleeding sensations of indigo, wrathful black and honey flavored browns; the palms brushing against smoothly uneven surface can trust desperation to speak fluently their bitter language of tint, woven through, in, about the silk-laced delicacy of summer's wind. {Hush, my restless soul, hush and be still you know only what you are given, to suffice for the pains you endure, the thirst for endless creativity. I cannot hear you now.} My eyes suffer needlessly for the touch of visual elegance, and the artists' food of brush, paper, unfolded world. Unsatisfied, insatiable urgency to envision heaven by breathing in the essence of blue, and intoxicating ivory snow. I know nothing, now, but resisting my lust for artistry, So that I may paint in words. Pen as my paintbrush and paper as portrait, the black of ink is every color I've craved for so long. the weightless skies alive in midday fervency is my unseen perception of cerulean lace dampened fog of palpable ash and neutrality is the faintest brushing of gray The sky, she is my muse. I blame her for this divinity of sound, sight, and soul. Poetry is wine upon an idealist's tongue, like deliberate melodies, impossibly intertwined to form silvery Chardonnay and the deep red rust of Merlot. Curse the sunrise with her brilliancy and impeccable taste for roses and dew. Mistakenly crafted is my skill, extensively unwound as from a spool of thread, fragile and mislead I feel the brittle cord unbind, a little more each day. My complacency is... illusively torn Intangibly yours, The Poet If I were to touch you, would you bleed a velvet river, running miracles through the sodden ground? --Moi [This message has been edited by IndigoEve (12-28-2003 09:07 AM).] |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
Dear Ria, You are a very talented poet. This is absolutely wonderful. Barb |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Breathtaking. Wow................  Well I will go down with this ship |
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wintertao Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 366Okaloosa Island, FL |
applause! |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Indigo Eve: The beauty of your descriptive phrases, leave me breathless! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Breathtaking indeed! This is masterfully done! You are extremely talented. |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
wow, this is awesome chicka! ...I'm 16...your way ahead of me in your writing skills. lol. - River Love hurts as bad as it feels good. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
IndigoEve~ You take my breath away with the beauty of your thoughts~ Impressively penned ... a stunning talent you possess~ I'm sharing this with some others who need to drop down into the Pub and read your talent~ Happy New Year to you poetess~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! just awesome! |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is awesome. I thank Marge for sharing your work. Betty |
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Shereen Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 57Michigan, USA |
How vividly, breathtakingly beautiful! One so young in years and yet so wise in awareness of her surroundings. You will go far, young IndigoEve... never lose your inner sight as it guides your spirit well. Incredibly well done. Shereen. |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
wow very very imaginative !!! totally n awe of this one. well done !! hugs june x |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
A very mature and impressive write. |
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