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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2003-12-27 12:44 PM


Summer Mourned

In coldness of a winter's night,
With sliver of a moon for light,
I walk along the frozen way
Remembering a summer's day.

A day when flowers bloomed with pride
And brightened up the country-side.
The trees encased in green array,
Whispered, "The easy times will stay".

But loveliest of days don't last,
Too soon the verdant beauty's past
And like our lives and loves in pain
We doubt the lushness comes again.

So come my love and walk with me:
The wind is blowing out to sea.
Seasons forever roll around;
Last Summer's love can be re-found.

By Joyce 12/26/03

© Copyright 2003 Joyce I Johnson - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2003-12-27 11:06 AM


Lovely, Joyce!
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2 posted 2003-12-27 11:11 AM


Absolutely beautiful, Joyce!  Thank you!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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3 posted 2003-12-27 08:16 PM


Joyce~
Absotively ... posilutely GORGEOUS~
Happy Holidays my friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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4 posted 2003-12-27 10:29 PM


Joyce:  What an enchanting poem!  Hope your Christmas was happy!

Love

Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Joyce Johnson
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5 posted 2003-12-27 11:23 PM


Thank you everyone and yes my Christmas was lovely.  I got a new digital camera.  Now to learn how to use it.  Love, Joyce
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6 posted 2003-12-31 01:13 PM


This poem read like a song to my heart! The words were just beautiful, and the metrics were great! I really enjoyed reading this...once, twice, three times, etc...stop me...NOT!!!


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7 posted 2003-12-31 03:08 PM


Flows very nicely! I love poems like this

We spend our whole lives trying to live, only to realize that we don’t know what life is truly about until it is too late.


Joyce Johnson
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8 posted 2003-12-31 04:44 PM


Thank you friends for bringing this poem back up, and your kind words.  Love, joyce
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9 posted 2004-01-03 02:30 PM


indeed, beautiful
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10 posted 2004-01-06 08:20 AM


its been a while since i logged on to this corner ( missed you all but felt ..  dried up and not able to contibute much and then the holidays took over lol. but .......  so glad i came today , this poem is so fabulous it has really brightened up my day and your wonderful words have picked me up with warmth and lit a tiny  spark of new inspiration for poetry ine me.

i just want to thank for once again giving endles pleasure with your words.

fabulous

love and hugs from june x

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11 posted 2004-01-06 08:30 AM


Joyce, this is quintessential you!  How beautifully put!
Shereen.

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12 posted 2004-01-06 08:56 AM


Joyce, this is wonderful. It's uplifting -especially for this time of year. Barb
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13 posted 2004-01-06 11:29 AM


We've been missing you junemac and Shereen this corner is going to be so much brighter with you contributing.  Thanks passing shadows and Beasley.  Everyone is too kind.  Love, Joyce
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14 posted 2004-01-17 02:07 PM


just had to read this again
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15 posted 2004-01-17 02:58 PM


Thank you sweet friend.Joyce
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16 posted 2004-02-22 10:36 PM


on to part two......
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