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Wesley the Blue
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since 1999-09-02
Posts 426
Forest Lake, MN, USA

0 posted 2003-12-15 04:23 AM



So here I am
Broken and alone
Forgotten by the world

Ive been used
Cheated and beaten
Abandoned

So here I am
Ive got nothing left
Not even my tears

My heart is dead
Blackened and cold
And no one mourned its passing

So here I am
Empty with dispair
Waiting

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Laicie
Junior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 37
Australia
1 posted 2003-12-15 06:00 AM


Wesley,
Waiting for someone to tell you what a heartfelt and sorrowful poem this is!
Man, there is so much pain in this! Where did you find it all? I can go on to say that it'll get better in time, but only you know that. Because only you can feel that, and change that yourself. I hope you still don't feel this bad. If you do, know there are people out there who do care for you, and value your friendship.
A beautiful, but sad read.
Laicie.

Those who love deeply Never grow old;
They may die of old age,But they die young.

Sir Arthur Wing Pinero

jaicie114
Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever
2 posted 2003-12-15 02:11 PM


Dear Wesley...

Ditto Laicie's comments. Looks like we have more than a similar username in common.  I WILL, however, tell you that it will get better. Time heals most wounds...even deep ones -- but, please never ever think that no one mourns your loss. We are all diminished when one is diminished. You are in my heart and my thoughts.

Nice write. Thank you for sharing.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
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Washington State
3 posted 2003-12-15 08:29 PM


Wesley you're a long way from dead when you can wring so much out of a few lines.  Love, Joyce
Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2003-12-21 04:40 PM








(big hugggsssssss) Oh Wesley, I send many angel hugs your way, sweet friend, I know just ow you feel but know we all care for you so very much and are happy to be your friends and soon you will find all your heart desires! (angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Wesley, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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