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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2003-12-12 08:29 AM



A Cold Pencil

A cold pencil on my desk
unbending like the dead
wearing blue like the sky
waiting for sunshine
but if I use it,
I will only warm the wood
for I have nothing to say

[This message has been edited by BloomingRose (12-12-2003 08:34 AM).]

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junemac
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1 posted 2003-12-12 10:37 AM


oh i love this one, very short but apt for the subject and you as ever say it well. i have a pencil just a cold sometimes.

thanks for sharing.

hugs june x

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2 posted 2003-12-12 05:16 PM


You just had a lot to say!

Betty Lou Hebert

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3 posted 2003-12-13 01:21 PM








(big hugggsssssss) Awwwwwww, I know how you feel, dearest friend, but know your heart is always singing when your pencil isn't and soon enough the poetry will come out and sound so gorgeous, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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4 posted 2003-12-15 08:27 PM


I agree.  You have much to say.  Always good to hear from you.  Joyce
BloomingRose
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5 posted 2003-12-16 04:15 PM


I think my brain has been on freeze for a while. Don't know when it's gonna thaw, but thanks anyway!

Deb

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