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Wesley the Blue
Member

since 1999-09-02

Posts 426
Forest Lake, MN, USA

0 posted 2003-12-09 03:34 AM

My heart knew what love was
Once long ago
But love is just a memory
Faded and yellowed with age
Stained by a rain of tears
Falling from haunted eyes
That have seen such hurt

My soul is hollow
Trapped in an empty shell
Longing to reach out
To feel something
Other than the pain
Of being forever alone
In the prison of my mind

"The usefulness of a cup is in its emptiness, for a cup that is full can hold no more."
-Roy Suenaka

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

1 posted 2003-12-09 05:11 AM

My heart knew what love was
Once long ago
But love is just a memory
Faded and yellowed with age
Stained by a rain of tears
Falling from haunted eyes
That have seen such hurt

My soul is hollow
Trapped in an empty shell
Longing to reach out
To feel something
Other than the pain
Of being forever alone
In the prison of my mind
wow excellent !!!!!!!!!!!!! loved this one, every word !!!! ....... well done

hugs june xxxxxxxxx

Sparticus
Member

since 2003-11-15

Posts 245

2 posted 2003-12-09 11:07 AM

This is a very nicely crafted and well done poem.

You have a wonderful craftsman like way about you, good creative approach as well.

Sparticus

Even with insects-
some can sing
some can't

-Issa
http://www.geocities.com/amanaman3/Jessepoems.html

Laicie
Junior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 37
Australia

3 posted 2003-12-09 07:04 PM

I know exactly what this poem is about! Sooo beautiful, yet sooo sad!

Those who love deeply Never grow old;
They may die of old age,But they die young.

Sir Arthur Wing Pinero

Wesley the Blue
Member

since 1999-09-02

Posts 426
Forest Lake, MN, USA

4 posted 2003-12-10 02:22 AM

Thank you all for your replies. Its always nice to know that there are others that understand.

KWM

Life is a path, not a destination. We travel along it one way or another. Always going somewhere but never ariving. Walking the path is always bett

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

5 posted 2003-12-12 09:29 PM

Nice job, Keith.

A well structured write, m'friend.

CB 8)

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2003-12-13 01:51 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Keith, I'm so sorry that you're feeling lonely, dearest friend, know that He has a plan and real soon love will come to your heart as you are so deserving of it and good things come to those who wait! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I send angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Keith, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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