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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind 
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Victorious Day Heat is burning sweats off my chest, As I breathe deeply for inner strength. My heartbeat is hopping faster than ever, My body so sore and tired that I wished My mother was with me, holding me in her arms. Suddenly, a vision comes, I see myself holding you in my arms. Just then, my breath becomes easily, And I hear your first cry in my motherhood. Oh tiny little hands and feet you have, I hang my arms over towards you. Oh thin hair on your bald little head, I blow delicately to your hair, As my fingers slide along your face. Suddenly, I am reminded of my mother's words. I see through your eyes in seeking resemblance. Just then, I feel my pain is worthy, Because I have found my mother's eyes in you. Oh how I wish you won't be like me, The me who always made my mother mad. Oh how I wish I could be young again- As I hold you dear against my chin, I realize how time is tightening on me. I am old enough to be a mother; Someday my parents will return to Him, A life is born, Resembling a life cycle is near to the end. Oh dear Lord, don't hold back your gifts. A sudden kicks from you, my child, Waken me up from tears of memories. My hands hold a new life, Transforming marriage to completeness. (c)Dec 7, 2003 Eliza Simmons Eliza Simmons |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Enjoyed reading this.. reminding me that motherhood is a gift.. a gift to be cherished |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Oh Songbird! Long time no see! Glad to see ya around, esp see ya dropping by my poem  Missed you. Love, Vivian |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
The deepest feelings in the world are when you first hold your baby. Lovely. Maggie |
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Laicie Junior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 37Australia |
It's such an undescribable feeling, isn't it? Beautiful poem, brought back sweet memories. Laicie |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*big smile* |
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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
What a beautiful poem, what a beautiful experience...of a beautiful memory. The poem seemed to have a cycle in it...and I felt the de ja vu! A beautiful read! Thanks for sharing this, pictureme :-) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
   (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is just beautiful, sweet friend, motherhood is a beautiful time in every woman's life I imagine and know your parents will always be proud of you and love you so much and may you share many precious memories with your children! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vivian, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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