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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2003-12-04 09:37 PM


Black Pearls

I love you,
Silently in your backseats.
I glance with admiration,
As you drive without disturbance.

Yet your smile,
Which shown through mirrors,
Lights up my face,
As my eyes blink-

Because the shine is too strong.

Without a word,
As my mind dreams into your arms.
Oh how I dearly wish
This car ride will never end.

My eyes blink
All because the shine of my love,
Is revelling,
From my heart, through my eyes into yours-

As a standing proof of my faith.

(c)Dec 4, 2003
Eliza Simmons


Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

[This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (12-06-2003 11:54 PM).]

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Sparticus
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since 2003-11-15
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1 posted 2003-12-05 10:14 AM


Your voice in this is strong...the feeling is deep and with conviction.

Well done.


Sparticus

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2 posted 2003-12-06 03:58 AM


nice
Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2003-12-06 06:20 PM




(smiles) Oh Eliza, this is beautiful, sweet friend, such wonderful convictions of your love shine and I wish for them to endure from here on! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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