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aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20
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0 posted 2003-11-26 02:32 PM


Hold Me Tonight

Sometimes I sit alone
On my side bed,
Leaning forward
Into my pillow,
As I hide the me inside.

True love won't lose who I am
When I'm with you and always.
Yet times after times I hide
The bothering thoughts of mine,
As you seek under each tree.

If you love me, you shall
Accept me as I am.
True love will always lend an ear.
Am I doubting your love,
Or am I distrusting myself?

Hold me into your arms tonight,
As I dream your eyes look into mine-
Speaking of
Endless stories I never told,
Yet somehow your heart understand...me.

(c)Nov 26, 2003
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

© Copyright 2003 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
Sparticus
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since 2003-11-15
Posts 245

1 posted 2003-11-26 02:47 PM


This is a very incredible, from the heart, write. I felt every word...what better poem is that?  wonderful read.


Sparticus

Even with insects-
some can sing
some can't

-Issa

cusick
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since 2003-07-27
Posts 668

2 posted 2003-11-26 04:11 PM


I love this and waiting for the next. Maggie
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3 posted 2003-11-26 06:12 PM




(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, and may true love always fill your heart and appreciate and love you for who you are and never deny you! (sigh) I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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Member Patricius
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4 posted 2003-11-26 11:04 PM


Eliza:  Very good writing!  The emotions really came through each line!

Betty Lou Hebert

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
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5 posted 2003-11-27 01:08 AM


Nice soul-searching. Here's hoping you find your answers with comfort to follow if it's needed.
Love,
Terri~

midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
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6 posted 2003-11-28 11:23 PM


Dear Eliza,

this is really nice!

Love
Michelle

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7 posted 2003-11-30 01:23 AM


nice...it gives me hope
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