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cusick
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0 posted 2003-11-25 05:53 AM



BEN

He's here at last, our baby boy,
after all those months of waiting
he is an angel all day long
so cute and entertaining.

Nightfall comes, and very soon
I'm dreaming,then I wake up with
a jolt,
our little boy is screaming.

His crumpled face is red with rage,
his nappy it needs changing,
and all the time I'm doing this
his future I'm arranging.

We'll send him back from
where he came, and catch
up with our sleeping.

When dawn arrives he's fast asleep
I know that we will keep him.

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Sparticus
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1 posted 2003-11-25 08:43 AM


Ah babies...Love them, but why are they so loud at odd hours?  Great poem, a nice funny twist.

Sparticus

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2 posted 2003-11-25 01:17 PM


Maggie:  Cute poem and if you can survive the first few months, a baby is really worth it!  They do grow out of that screaming stage........usually!

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3 posted 2003-11-25 02:57 PM


Adorable.  This stage won't last and you will be so glad you kept him.  Love, Joyce
cusick
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4 posted 2003-11-25 03:15 PM


Soparticus, Trllion and Joyce, thank you for answreing but this was many years ago. Maggie.
jaicie114
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5 posted 2003-11-26 12:01 PM


Maggie...

Very well done!  And, if this "was years ago" you certainly must have endured your share of screaming to remember it! LOL  I enjoyed the memories, too...but, I'm ever so thankful I'm a grandparent now!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

cusick
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6 posted 2003-11-26 08:29 AM


Thanks jaicie, we have all been through it. Luckily both my boys slept very well but did they make up for it when they were on the move?
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7 posted 2003-11-26 07:07 PM




********Baby Showers******** (big angel hugs) Oh Maggie, I am so happy to hear this wonderful news, sweet friend, Congratulations on your new bundle of joy, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, and may Ben bring many more special memories to you and your family, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maggie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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