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jaicie114
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On the edge of forever

0 posted 2003-11-22 11:05 PM


Each tear that falls
Is a prayer.

A prayer for you,
A prayer for me,
A prayer for our salvation
From this pain
That threatens to steal
Our joy,
Our light
Our very existence.

Each tear that falls
Is a prayer.

A prayer of understanding
A prayer of forgiveness
A prayer to clear the veil
From our hearts
So that we may embrace
Our Light
Our life
Our pure essence.

Each tear that falls
Is a prayer.

A prayer to you,
A prayer to me,
A prayer to Source
To hold us in Truth
While we quaver,
Regaining our footing.
In this realm
In this time
And in this space.

For each tear that falls
Is a prayer of love
For all that was
And all that is meant to be.

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

© Copyright 2003 Jaicie - All Rights Reserved
SharaRose
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1 posted 2003-11-23 10:32 AM


Isn't it funny how you will say something, and then later on someone will say something that reminds you of your own words. Just this morning I was talking to my husband about how sometimes people will mock your beliefs, and I was telling him how through trials in our lives we find our "source" for strength through Him in prayer. I loved this. It also reminded me of that conversation not more than an hour and a half ago. I am saving this one, because it made me see I'm not the only one that says it out loud that HE is our source!
Sparticus
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2 posted 2003-11-23 12:48 PM


I enjoyed the chant like way you wrote this...very effective.


Sparticus

Even with insects-
some can sing
some can't

-Issa

jaicie114
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3 posted 2003-11-23 01:01 PM


Thank you SharaRose and Sparticus...

This has been a difficult time for me and I always need to express it in verse. I'm glad you could benefit from it...for that makes my work worthwhile. (I'm really much better writing from the Light...but, right now it is hidden from view.)

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Trillium
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4 posted 2003-11-23 01:21 PM


jc:  This touches the heart and I hope it won't be long until you are no longer counting the tears falling!

Betty Lou Hebert

jaicie114
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5 posted 2003-11-23 03:18 PM


Thank you, Trillium...

Yes...I'm hoping that they are finished as well. Thank you for your well wishes.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2003-11-26 07:34 PM






(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, my heart always prays for all the children and less fortunate out there and I always work at a rescue mission every month and love to see smiles when I serve them food and talk to them! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, you have a golden, compassionate heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jaicie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Joyce Johnson
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7 posted 2003-11-26 07:53 PM


May the sunshine of joy dry the tears of sorrow.  Love, Joyce
jaicie114
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On the edge of forever
8 posted 2003-11-27 08:11 PM


Thank you for your beautiful comments, Noah and Joyce. I truly appreciate them. And, yes...the tears have stopped falling and I'm spending most of my time in the Light again. For that, I am sincerely thankful.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

passing shadows
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9 posted 2003-11-30 01:20 AM


never looked at tears that way but now I do...and I thank you
Ericc
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10 posted 2003-11-30 08:22 AM


Beautiful Jc...very soulful.

Love,
Eric

Beasley
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11 posted 2003-11-30 11:08 AM


jc, I'm new here so bear with me. I really like this poem. The power in prayer is incredible.
barb

jaicie114
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12 posted 2003-11-30 11:37 PM


passing shadows, eric, and barb...

Thank you, each of you, for your wonderful comments. I am glad that you enjoyed my work.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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