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Hockeychick19
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0 posted 2003-11-21 04:26 PM


The River

It flows wherever it’s wildest dreams may occur,
Where Heartache and Passion collide.

There will be a lot of things that on it’s own it can not decide,
Someone must make these decisions to keep it flowing, but who?

That person can be anyone you wish, but the person that does the majority of the thinking should be you.

“The River” is life as it explains,
“The River” is just a name.

Dreams you can conquer and count,
Therefore please don’t treat life like a little tiny ounce.

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

© Copyright 2003 Kelly Gambon - All Rights Reserved
Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 2003-11-21 05:09 PM


“The River” is life as it explains

says a lot...

regards
sudhir

Hockeychick19
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2 posted 2003-11-21 05:20 PM


Sudhir I'm glad you liked it... Thanks for reading it.

~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

Joyce Johnson
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3 posted 2003-11-22 11:50 AM


Likening Life to a River is very apt.  joyce
Sparticus
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4 posted 2003-11-23 12:29 PM


I enjoyed this...reminds me of Siddhartha by Hesse...One of those required books of long ago.  Rivers are great subjects.

Sparticus

Even with insects-
some can sing
some can't

-Issa

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5 posted 2003-11-23 01:40 PM


Kelly:  I enjoyed your poem!  We all have rivers running through our lives, don't we!

Betty Lou Hebert

Hockeychick19
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6 posted 2003-11-23 09:44 PM


Joyce - Thanks Joyce I thought so too.

Sparticus - I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Trillium - Yes everyone's life is nothing but a river that just keeps on flowing... I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Thank you everyone for reading
~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

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7 posted 2003-11-26 07:23 PM




(smiles) Life is a rivers confluence, which each river, each stream, each creek, is our bloodlines, our veins, all part of us and channeling with different blessings and emotions, yay! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Hockeychick19
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8 posted 2003-11-26 07:49 PM


Thank you Noah... I'm glad you enjoyed it.

~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

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