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tecoyah
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since 2003-11-16
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0 posted 2003-11-21 07:49 AM


Entrenched in shattered bliss
Afterglow of passion
Remembered taste of delicate kiss
Now alone

Consumed by past embrace
Licking wounds of grief
Phantom lovers take the place
Still alone

Exposed emotions torn apart
Chilled and grown detached
No other can redeem this heart
Forever alone


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jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever
1 posted 2003-11-22 11:43 PM


Wow, Tecoyah...

This is beautiful, but devastating...I sure hope you're wrong. I've had a pretty rotten day...but, there's always hope for tomorrow. I hope this is not a reality for you. Know you are in my heart and my thoughts.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

tecoyah
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NY
2 posted 2003-11-23 11:56 AM


no worries...just a poem, guess I have an active imagination
Sparticus
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since 2003-11-15
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3 posted 2003-11-23 12:51 PM


Not just a poem, a well written one that makes the reader care about the voice speaking in this.

Sparticus

Even with insects-
some can sing
some can't

-Issa

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4 posted 2003-11-23 01:19 PM


tecoyah:  Poignant poem!  I'm glad it is an imaginary situation!

Betty Lou Hebert

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5 posted 2003-11-26 07:37 PM




(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I send many angel hugs your way as I know you will find true happiness and feel for you! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tecoyah, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2003-11-30 01:24 AM


you do sad very well
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