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paraboxer
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0 posted 2003-11-20 04:07 AM



(AN: Yet againa muse does inspire. Read my previous works from To My Lili Marlene on down.)

Never Known Love

Again I awake before dawn, dreaming.
But yet again not acheiving.
An ideal I believed in, love.
I pray for help from above.

I'm like a faithful hound.
Whom love's only kicked around.
Broken, shattered, feeling forlorn.
Listening to music early earning room mate's scorn.

Understandable, that's truly my fault.
My life's been brought to a halt.
So I wake in the wee, early hour.
A victim that rejection chose to devour.

I'm like the dolphin born in the concrete pool.
Just the broken, romantic fool.
Who's never once known requited love.



© Copyright 2003 Carl - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-11-20 04:08 AM


ouch
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2003-11-20 09:25 AM


Carl~

To know, feel and give love is life's greatest pleasure ... to receive love is a blessing from above~

You will undoubtly meet the person who will return that love~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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SharaRose
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3 posted 2003-11-20 10:39 AM


Love shouldn't be that hard to do. I have learned something the *V*E*R*Y* hardest way. Love is not love until it's returned. Something felt by both. You can offer love, but until it's returned it's not true to you. Love will be true to you as well as the other. Believe it! From the voice of experience.
Love,
Terri~

Sparticus
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4 posted 2003-11-20 03:23 PM


Love is that bouncy thing, elusive, attractive... a siren singing love songs with your name!

Great piece.

Sparticus

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5 posted 2003-11-20 04:31 PM






(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, dearest Carl, I know how you feel ever so much reading all your heartfelt poems and believe me when I say love will always find a way, just keep giving and then it'll give upon you! (sigh) This is precious, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Carl, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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