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kaleanna
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0 posted 2003-11-18 01:52 AM



falling into silence

falling into silence
as love dies quietly
a cold wind fills the empty space
where warm arms once embraced

heart hurting, tears falling
falling into silence
kisses, hugs 'n cuddles disappear
when once those were held dear

smiles are no where to be found
now seems only a grumpy attitude's around
falling into silence
this vibrant and caring love does

disappearing, no use in searching
cold empty space replacing
a warm caring vibrant love that has
fallen into silence
(written nov 17, 2003)

Meesh

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Sparticus
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since 2003-11-15
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1 posted 2003-11-18 09:25 AM


A very sweet poem, I love the images you have in this one.

Sparticus

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2 posted 2003-11-19 11:11 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Meesh, I know this feeling as this happened to me New Years Day this year but believe me when I say hat the warmth will again fill your heart as you are destined to find happiness in your deserving heart! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I send healing hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Meesh, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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3 posted 2003-11-20 04:33 AM


hugs to you
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