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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2003-11-17 08:29 PM


Woman of a City

Lonely woman of a city,
Someone trying to find her own identity in her body,
Gazing down her vagina, she sobs,
"Am I a virgin anymore?"
I'm being exposed by the sun,
Yet I hope the sun can see that I'm in the light.
I'm getting tired of the dark side of the city.

Sobbing another tear,
The woman of the loner city sits,
Alone exposing to the publicity,
Shame maybe numbed right now.
Lonely woman of a city,
Someone trying to find her own identity in her own body,
She sobs and the sunrise and sunset, another day ellipses.

(c)Nov 16, 2003
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

© Copyright 2003 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
Sparticus
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since 2003-11-15
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1 posted 2003-11-18 09:33 AM


A good dark write, I felt the pain in this one.


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2 posted 2003-11-19 11:19 PM




(big hugggsssssss) It saddens me to see what the city can do to so many, dearest friend, you have to be able to retrace your footsteps every once in a while if you expect to get anywhere! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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3 posted 2003-11-30 01:50 AM


damn good...
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