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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2003-11-17 05:53 PM


The First Step

The grandest epic starts with
But one word at a time.
You must tread on that first step
If stairway you would climb.

Foremost notes don't make a song
But surely must be played
Before a firm foundation
For the musical is laid.

Don't leap to a conclusion
Without initial clue.
You must have a beginning
For an ending to ensue.

There never was a scholar
Without the one who taught.
And there must be a problem
For answer to be sought.

In life there are no shortcuts
To reach the final goal.
To travel that big highway
You first must pay the toll.

No master of his craft will claim
The learning part he leapt.
Success in an endeavor comes
From taking that first step.

By: Joyce 11/17/03

© Copyright 2003 Joyce I Johnson - All Rights Reserved
wintertao
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1 posted 2003-11-17 08:19 PM


Excellent! I really enjoyed this...
paraboxer
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2 posted 2003-11-17 09:09 PM


Wonderfully done and certainly applicable to any and all things one endeavors to pursue. Enjoyed the work quite well.
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3 posted 2003-11-18 01:14 PM


Very well done, the rhyme is beautiful, the message is quite deep and I enjoyed the whole experience here.

Sparticus

Even with insects-
some can sing
some can't

-Issa

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4 posted 2003-11-19 11:22 PM




(sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is so very true and ever too often many tend to want to fast-forward but then realize that too many details were missed and the primry motive is to get to know your place and point of origin! (big hugggsssssss) I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joyce, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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5 posted 2003-11-21 08:17 AM


ahaa!!  I knew there was a philosopher lurking in there somewhere! well done dear.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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6 posted 2003-11-21 12:09 PM


Dear Joyce:  This is wise and wonderful! That first step is sometimes so hard to take, but the rewards are usually worth it, as you have pointed out!

Betty Lou Hebert

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7 posted 2003-11-30 01:49 AM


you are very wise...and thank you for sharing that
Beasley
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8 posted 2003-11-30 11:21 AM


Dear Joyce,
I really like this. It is very inspirational. Is it ok if I copy it?
Barb

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9 posted 2003-11-30 11:33 AM


So true, and I like the rhyming all the way through just flowed off my tongue when I read it to my hubby. Nice, like a note of reminder to look ahead before you leap, too, as well as the thought nothing begins without that first step.
Love,
Terri~

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (11-30-2003 11:35 AM).]

junemac
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10 posted 2003-11-30 05:22 PM


joyce this is great !!

i always enjoy yours and this one is so wise too.
hugs june x

Joyce Johnson
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11 posted 2003-11-30 10:05 PM


Thanks Friends and of course you may copy it.  Love, Joyce
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12 posted 2003-12-01 01:15 AM


Joyce...

What simply elegant truths.

Thank you!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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