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tecoyah
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since 2003-11-16
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NY

0 posted 2003-11-16 08:10 PM


interrupted from closed eyed stupor
that red glow, smoldering
a retinal ember behind my consciousness
the heat of waking muscles, damn blinds
letting in the fractal beams
tearing old fabric
grasping at these ruined dreams
a ray of sun to stop the screams
illuminate the tragic
away these thoughts of magic
another interrupted night
another day upon my life

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kaleanna
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since 2003-08-18
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TX, USA
1 posted 2003-11-16 08:52 PM


interesting read, interesting write


Meesh

wintertao
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since 2003-11-17
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Okaloosa Island, FL
2 posted 2003-11-17 08:13 PM


very nice
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3 posted 2003-11-19 10:58 PM




(sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, your words truly glow like embers across these pages that afterglow in wisdom and heart! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tecoyah, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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