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cusick
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0 posted 2003-11-15 10:14 AM



I wish I was in Brigantine
on Jerseys southern coast,
feel thesand between my toes,
watch asone legged seagulls doze,
chat with friends in circle bar
admire Atlantic City from afar.

Follow the path to the salty sea
Where refreshing breezes blow,
Dance in the waves
Neath a setting sun,
Feeling life has just begun

Just to be in Brigantine
On the beautiful silvery shore,
Back home here in England
wishing to be there once more.

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1 posted 2003-11-15 02:32 PM






(sigh) I have never been there yet but it must be a beautiful place, sweet friend, I know of the yearning ever so much where you love where you are yet want to be back somewher else, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

SharaRose
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2 posted 2003-11-15 07:37 PM


Sounds wonderful. Makes me want to visit.
Love,
Terri~

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-11-16 03:41 AM


homesick...I think we all get that now and then
cusick
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4 posted 2003-11-16 05:11 AM


Thank you for your lovely reply Noah. Maggie
cusick
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5 posted 2003-11-16 05:12 AM


it is a lovely place Terri, than you for reading. Maggie
cusick
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6 posted 2003-11-16 05:14 AM


Thank you for replying passing Shadows. Maggie
Dennis L. White
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7 posted 2003-11-16 09:05 AM


Sweet are the memories
That carry us through
That lift us back up
When we feel blue

They oft support us
Where-ever we roam
And cheer our hearts
Sweet thoughts of Home

Nice job!


Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)



cusick
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8 posted 2003-11-16 09:08 AM


Denis, thank you for your reply and beautiful poem. Maggie
Maddy vanD
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9 posted 2003-11-17 01:30 AM


Lovely piece. I love it!

Maddy
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cusick
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10 posted 2003-11-17 08:09 AM


Thanks for repluing maddie. Maggie
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