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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind 
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Oh Night Sitting outside in the middle of the field, Laying back on the grass as I observe, "Oh what a wonderful sky," as I point with my finger. My eyes follow the pointer round and round. The clouds seem to be swirling along As I stir the coffee I have just bought from Starbucks. My eyes run with the spoon, Flashing back in elementary film, Yearns Again for times when once I sat upon A "No Fault Saf Dek". Freely left out a loud giggling, As I felt the wind cooling off my sweats. My sweats made me feel good about the hot weather. My back was showered by steaming breeze, As my eyes grasping the colors fleeing with time. My mind was mixed with butterflies. Tonight as I observed the clouds in the sky, My mind is filled with dragonflies, Whose noses are hiding behind water lilies. Lilies love to show off their walk, Tiptoe across the water plain, As lightbugs give glow to the dimmed night. Oh night, how you fill my mind with fantasy, And put my mind into endless sleep. ©Nov 13, 2003 Eliza Simmons Eliza Simmons |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nicely done...I was right there |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhEliza~ THIS - 'My mind is filled with dragonflies, Whose noses are hiding behind water lilies. Lilies love to show off their walk, Tiptoe across the water plain' - is rich with imagery~ And I don't know what this is - No Fault Saf Dek- I'd like to~ ? *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
"No Fault Saf Dek" Is a circle platform with handles to help children to climb on it, and then someone spin the handles and the platform move.........something at playground |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Eliza, I've always known what those No Fault Saf Dek's are and I just love spinning on it and pushing it faster with my feet, which it is especially fun when someone special is with you! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is spellbinding, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you, Eliza~ I have played on them since my childhood days, just had never heard them called that~ I appreciate you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ NjkKa ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
I am just enjoying a nice dose of your poems...do you have a web site? I would love to get to know your work even more, you have a beautiful way of expressing yourself in poetry. Sparticus. |
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