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IndigoEve
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Etched in the illusion of time

0 posted 2003-11-12 09:17 PM


**I can't seem to write anything worthwhile anymore, forgive me. Seeing the Matrix Revolutions has done something horrible to my muse, I think...this is based off it.**

Love has held me strong to you
But for each beginning, there is an end
Death does forge our last adieu
Love has held me strong to you
Thoughts pour from lips, long overdue
Though life's rules we twice did bend
Love has held me strong to you
But for each beginning, there is an end



If I were to touch you, would you bleed a velvet river, running miracles through the sodden ground? --Moi

[This message has been edited by IndigoEve (11-12-2003 09:19 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-11-12 10:07 PM


IndigoEve:  If this is not worthwhile, what is? Sounds just fine to me!

Betty Lou Hebert

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2 posted 2003-11-13 12:57 PM


I like it, you're still doing fine.  Love, Joyce
junemac
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3 posted 2003-11-13 03:03 AM


ahhhhhh indigo eve,
nothing wrong here your muse speaks volumes

hugs and stuff june x

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4 posted 2003-11-14 04:18 PM




(sigh) Yeah, I think The Matrix Revolutions disappointed and discouraged many, but it can never rid of your voice as your poetry is far more special! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, keep thinking of beginnings, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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5 posted 2003-11-14 10:50 PM


IndigoEve~
I just love the all of this~

You're forgiven -
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
       noles1@totcon.com   

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6 posted 2006-04-06 12:37 PM


Great triolet, and very worthy of notice.
midnightblues
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7 posted 2006-04-06 10:00 AM


I like this!

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

sympl_gurl
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8 posted 2006-04-06 03:56 PM


how true you are. For each begining there is an end. Is anything eternal? Its hard to grasp. I dont like thinking of things ending, especially good things, but hey, isn't that what they say?<"all good things must come to and end"
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