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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk 
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Positive Underneath the veneer Behind the facade She trembles Hair tightly clasped Precision drawn mouth She trembles Eyes boldly daring Defiantly thrust chin She trembles Tailored in control Shoed in confidence She trembles The tremble gathers speed Running fluidly, wildly Through every nerve Every cell of her body Spiralling outwards Shaking violently Rocking her world Crumbling her defenses Woman becomes mother ....... She trembles |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
It does have that frightening effect on us doesn't it? Becoming a mother for the first time can seem quite overwhelming. But, in time...we seem to get right into the swing of things. Good write..much enjoyed. Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh June, though I am not a woman, I understand how big of a transition it can be for any woman to go to her motherhood, and I believe a husband and loved ones should always be supportive of her when she finally begins to get used to mothering! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, you will always be a wonderful mother, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet June, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
thank you both. this was a new kind of poem to me but i enjoyed wording it lol. hugs june x |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
junemac: There is always an element of fear, besides the anticipation of becoming a mother, but it's always worth it! Enjoyed your poem. Betty Lou Hebert |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
oooooh to be a mother... Dear June this is so precious! *hugZ* Love Michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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paraboxer Member
since 2002-11-10
Posts 121Maryland, USA |
Lovely lyrics describing the turbulence of being a mother. I know this feeling quite well for when my aunt was pregnant with my cousin she often talked of feeling this way. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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