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Kensho_Cinder*
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In the Flow

0 posted 2003-10-30 10:33 PM



As light fades between oak and pecan leaves
it leaves behind the dust of today
Scattered with hues of autumn and purple.

A spray of water from a leaky hose
reflects the Sun's reassurance in a faceted dance

A siren
It fades.

Evening breeze carries under its arm the aroma of green
As summer begins its last stanza.

In the tango of days
Light persists.

To live in its midst--
beyond syllables.


7/26/2003

The present is tomorrow's yesterday.

© Copyright 2003 Brandon Smith - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-10-31 01:39 PM


Kensho:  This is just beautiful!

Betty Lou Hebert

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2 posted 2003-11-01 12:21 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, I love the gorgeous animation and imagery of this, sweet friend, I love seeing prisms through every waterdrop and rain tear, yay, God Bless You, this is dazzling, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brandon, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (11-01-2003 12:21 AM).]

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