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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... 
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The Dancer Her smile comes slightly as though she is unsure how beautiful she truly is… Her head tilted slightly her eyes questioning her laugh at her own expense. Tis absolutely a wonder can she really question? how can this deception grow? What kind of sick animal has seeded this insecurity that has clouded her vision so? Her doubt is so obvious carries deeply the scars no one else may ever see… Makes the Watcher furious perhaps even murderous someone owes her life...indeed. She dances melancholy, listless her heart guarded, safe her defense that diminishes her. Sad smile comes painfully as told she is a child of God and how beautiful she truly is… ~~~~~~  |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Tramp Poet: This is beautiful and sad, with a note of hope at the end. Good write! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssssss) Oh Daniel, this is so heartachingly beautiful, sweet friend, every child is beautiful and I hope soon she realizes how graceful and beautiful she really is and get up and take the ballroom! (wipes tears) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
A lovely thoughtful poem. Joyce |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
quite the observer of people thanks for sharing the scene |
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