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junemac
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0 posted 2003-10-24 03:58 PM



Agony of seperation
Painful needing time
Another day of wanting
Ripping up my mind

Too much to bear...

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1 posted 2003-10-24 04:34 PM



Well done.  I immediately
got into your head, and wanted out.
It began to hurt!  To know a want
that goes unfulfilled -
leaves a terrible craving.

You did a good job on just that
feeling, in a short, concise, manner.  
Thank you, June.

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2 posted 2003-10-24 05:04 PM


Intense feeling here, June.  ( You must have gone to same school I did.  I was as certain as I could be that separate could also be spelled seperate.  I am sure that is the way I spelled it in school all those many years ago.  Love, Joyce
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3 posted 2003-10-24 07:11 PM


june:  This is intense!  Separations are so hard sometimes and seem endless!

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2003-10-25 05:40 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh June, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, I hope all is well and that soon love is close to your heart forever again and never leaves! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet June, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

junemac
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5 posted 2003-10-25 06:13 PM


thank you all for your lovely comments. I am absolutely fine, you all make me feel so guilty when i post work like this as it is not factual just fiction but i am glad you thought it was good.
hugs and blessings to you all
june xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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