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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA 
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Across September's Sky The golden leaves are glowing Against a dome of blue. The air is filled with sighings, From breezes passing through. Kingfishers call and flickers And wild geese flying by, Add haunting call while winging Across September's sky. We sit until the evening chill Comes slowly creeping in, To blow its cooling, autumn breath Upon our sun-tanned skin. We watch the clouds of sunset turn From orange to deepest red, Then rise and hurry homeward while September goes to bed! Betty Lou Hebert [This message has been edited by Trillium (09-28-2003 01:10 PM).] |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Very nice!!!  Shara~  Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Oh nice Betty. It describes September beautifully. We are having a fantastic September. Still warm as July until the evening chill comes. Love, Joyce |
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paraboxer Member
since 2002-11-10
Posts 121Maryland, USA |
September is such a beautiful month. Thanks for helping me realize that. It was when I met "my Lili Marlene" for the first time ever when we sat together in English class. Anyhoo this poem served to remind me that even though she doesn't share my feelings life is still a beautiful thing. Thank you kindly. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautifully colorful, sweet friend, only a few trees here have gotten yellow so far but I truly feel the new season coming in, yay! (does happy dance in the leaves) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is soft and tranquil, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Betty, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Betty Lou Your words had such a serene feeling to them which was so very much enjoyed. Your words took me there. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Shara: thanks for reading and commenting. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Joyce: We are having a wonderful September here too. Glad you enjoyed this poem. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
paraboxer: You're right about life being a beautiful thing. No matter what down times we have, that is still true. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Noah: Thanks for the art work! Lovely picture! Enjoyed hearing from you. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: Always enjoy hearing from you and appreciate your comments. Betty Lou Hebert |
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gringakiwi Member
since 2003-08-05
Posts 189 |
Very nice trillium! although it is now Spring here in New Zealand, it made me get an autumny chill! nicely done. Connie |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Connie: Nice to hear from you. Wish I could come to your land for summer there and skip winter here! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Betty Lou, this was just so beautiful! I just love the way you write! Really I do! I have been wanting to write some poetry about the beautiful Autumn season, but just too many other things have come up instead... Oh well, I still have some time left... lol Again, your poetry, is right up my alley! So Nicely Done! Richy |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Wonderful poem. Fall is my favorite time of year. Thanks, Melton |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Richy: Thanks for your nice comments. Living where you do, I'm sure you have lots of time yet, to write about the fall. Our season is much shorter! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Melton: Good to hear from you and thanks! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
aww, this is soo wonderful! I loved the imagery and especially the last line. Absolutely lovely! ~*Krista Lee Knutson*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Alwye: Thanks for your nice comments. Appreciate them! Betty Lou Hebert |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
indeed it does |
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