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Tramp Poet
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0 posted 2003-09-27 11:08 AM


Love:
"To experience deep affection or intense desire for another."

Shall we entwine as I whisper
murmurs of deep, overwhelming desire
touching your heart as you have mine?
Afraid, unsure ofintense beginnings
holding back a defense, frightened somewhat...
memories of pain haunting, as we struggle.

We struggle to break free of hurtful past
building tomorrows formed of todays
emotions, devotion...awakened, aroused.
Perhaps unreal;dreaming, or so it seems
can happiness really be together as one
as we build separate into something ours.

Too soon to speak the "L" word
advised to go slow, take our time
afraid to speak it... making haste slowly.
Can it be...for you and old, silly me
will the love be expressed, shared, matured
shall i scream it from the rooftops, my dear?

My lady of love; I shall whisper, I shall murmur,
I shall shout, I shall declare, I shall proclaim,
I shall define my love speaking your name.
You say to me; "be sure, please don't hurt me"
I can only reply... " you are my beloved"
sure as sure can ever be... thee, thee, thee.

~~~~~~~



© Copyright 2003 Daniel James Burt - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2003-09-27 01:35 PM




(smiles) Oh Daniel, this is beautiful, sweet friend, let those lungs be filled and bellow your love over the rooftops of the world in song! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, JoAnne's heart is bound to be touched and melted deeply by this gorgeous serenade, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

paraboxer
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2 posted 2003-09-27 02:25 PM


Good luck pal. Be sure to tell her how you feel before extenuating circumstances get in the way (my poem Lili Marlene explains this). Tell her how you feel before it's too late in gesture and in word.


Joyce Johnson
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3 posted 2003-09-28 12:48 PM


My best wishes for you and your love.  You are right to take it slow.  Joyce
gringakiwi
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4 posted 2003-09-30 07:50 PM


What did aesop say? slow but sure wins the race.
Well written, and so heartfelt.
Lovely write,
Connie.

Annie78
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5 posted 2003-10-03 06:50 PM


dear noah...yes i do and did love my man's poetry...my heart is bound to this man forever because he is the only man in the world that can make me cry happy tears.
JoAnne...who is Danny's Annie forever and ever and ever...thanks

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6 posted 2003-10-23 04:23 AM


very romantic
Annie78
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7 posted 2005-04-16 01:24 AM


i'm so sorry i disappointed you, my first reply to this is still true tho circumstances would say no. be happy
Annie

there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles

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