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IndigoEve
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Etched in the illusion of time

0 posted 2003-09-26 11:06 PM


**Pardon the length!! **

oh, for the shame of passion
delicately known
barely alive, to stumble
into shaded grounds and
gaze
upon the rapture of your beauty
painted porcelain dreams
for thee
mon aimé, toujours


fall away,
amid supple young lilies
combed with gold dust
this day,
the throes of torrid springtime rain
shower
them
in a mist of forgetful longing.

such repercussions
unmentionable

we are tainted, lover
borrowed from the melodies of
a subtle breeze
drifting along as easily, prayerfully unnoticed
sanctity, my love
this is true holiness
your lips like satin fire
against my blanching hand


she steals up the hem of silk
pewter and gold spread in
rich cascades of fabric
pooling around feet spun from liquid glass
tears and musings
cannot compare
this ardor she feels
for his soul

eyes burn an amber ocean
into her turquoise sea
oh fire!
oh unruly flame!
spreading quicker 'cross the Atlantic
through the essence of her mind

just as refined, e'en chasing stars
in the light of midday's fancy
my darling
I say it again-
for the shame of passion
with a touch of virgin innocence
you and I
hands, but lips intertwined
to speak not of heated fervency
but a weightlessly fragile kiss


sewing butterflies into her stare
replacing broken wings
with the sighs and breaths of a contented man
simply indulged
how she entangles her nimble fingers
in his ecru tresses
staining each strand with her lips
her own hair falling 'round them
a curtain of ebony-winged relief

pray, hide them

the world knows not what they do

mon amour, wordless dignity
be thine gift
to embellish my soul
with the preciosity of tingeing silence
it covers me in a wave
of sentiment
I can hear it
sounds of budding emotion
raining around us
blushing a flawless aria to grace
the ivory wood of our gazebo
shrine to me
goddess of your bleeding heart
oh, but lover, do not leave me yet.
'tisn't the hour,
nor the place...


deux amoureux
blissfully condemned by their twining of fate
like fingers upon fingers
and eyes within eyes

hushed fears quieted by some season's
changing
always turning into a greener spring

what a beautifully tragic way
to sigh

L'amour interdit
...the forbidden love

frozen in place with the wind
they never leave
sleeping in the other's embrace
oh, curse thee who finds them here
and stirs them both awake

For saints have hands that pilgrims' hands do touch,
And palm to palm is holy palmers' kiss.--"Romeo and Juliet"

© Copyright 2003 Imbued - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2003-09-27 01:31 PM




(big hugggsssss) Oh my gosh, you are so amazingly talented, sweet friend, wow, only 15, you are wise beyond many years! (sigh) Forbidden love truly can hurt and damage many and I only pray many can come to their senses and break free from the dark temptation, God Bless You, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Trillium
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Member Patricius
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Idaho, USA
2 posted 2003-09-27 10:41 PM


Indigo Eve:  An impressive write indeed!

Betty Lou Hebert

paraboxer
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since 2002-11-10
Posts 121
Maryland, USA
3 posted 2003-09-27 10:43 PM


You sure capture why love is such a tough emotion with this poem.
Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
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4 posted 2003-09-28 12:52 PM


Pure romance.  Joyce
pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
5 posted 2003-09-29 08:02 AM


this is a brilliantly crafted piece. Your talent shines like a beacon in the night. welcome to the corner.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-10-23 04:31 AM


into my library!
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