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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 Azalea Glade By: Noah Eaton 9/26/03 Your blush has won me Discovering my fragile passion I make this constitutional Deep within the calico of your womanhood Skulking in forests of strawberry ice Within the purple satin of this azalea glade… White lightning cradled over the river Where the fawn drinks of jasmine wine Stamens of tangelo tie-dye the mother-of-pearl sky Scarlet pistil, make the dawn come alive Honeymoon honey never tasted so sweet Plumleaf desserts shared in this azalea glade… Little Macanthra, your cheeks of bing cherry cherubs Sakuragata smiles, pink pancake fantasies Little pitchers filled with honeydew juice Bee-dazzlers napping under rose-shell parasols Peachy keen children, with lemon drop freckles Mandarin light belly buttons, and orchid lollipop grins Tossing starfish beachballs in this azalea glade… Beyond a pleasant creek of buttermilk rouge This Satsuki festival lasts more than a month Coral bells chiming crystal wine-glass serenades The Carmine Queen and the cherry-blossom maharajah All-a-glow with the royalty in this tussah silk kingdom Come, dear magical maiden, and I shall take you there Beyond the poppyseed trail of this azalea glade…   I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth I can see the sun set and I perceive ***Live*** [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-26-2003 02:26 PM).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Breathtaking Noah! hugs, Chris Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Noah: This is an inspired and brilliant write! I'm so glad I got to read it today! Unforgettable! Betty Lou Hebert |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
I feel I just read the breath of God. What He would say...Lovely, and DEVINE words!! Georgeous words, and VERY pretty pictures of nature to add more beauty to what already was. Thanks for sharing this.   SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! [This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-26-2003 04:22 PM).] |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Noah, I am truly convinced now, that you will never cease to amaze me! As far as beautiful poetry goes, this is in a category all it’s own! Noah, are you being published? If not, you most certainly should be. True art like this, should, and must, be shared with the world. The inspiration that you could provide for so many would be astonishing! And you so deserve the recognition. You’ve truly been blessed with a wonderful gift. You are very special Noah! This, and you, are one of my all time favorites! Absolutely Amazing!! Richy |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Noah: I have been thinking about this all day. I had to come and read it again and enjoy the beautiful graphics. Even more impressive the second time around! Lovely! Betty Lou Hebert |
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gringakiwi Member
since 2003-08-05
Posts 189 |
Noah: Hope you dont mind but this is going to be my new "happy place"!It sounds like you have described heaven! what a beautiful way with words you have m'darlin!  Connie. xxoxx |
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LiquidMidnight Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 50 |
This was more of a painting than just a poem, IMO. A lot of references to colors through out is what gave me that impression. (calico, now there's a word you don't here often, unless you are talking about cats  ) I like visually stimulating works and this was very visually stimulating. The photos attached were a beautiful touch. |
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paraboxer Member
since 2002-11-10
Posts 121Maryland, USA |
Excellent work. Absolutely marvelous imagery. Thanks for the review and I really appreciate the sympathy. Hopefully I can still retain the friendship with my Lili Marlene... |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
Fabulou,,,, |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Beautiful picture and magnificent words. Just lovely, Noah. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 gorgeous! |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
oh my goodness !! such an amazing talent for imagery. this is incredible. hugs june x |
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