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junemac
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0 posted 2003-09-23 05:56 PM



Just before dusk lays its ebony veil
Is an incredible beauty you can almost inhale

Rich warm air settles sweetly in calm
Soothing body and heart with its whispering balm

Trees silhouetted on an amber sky
A black lace salute to day gone by

Soft gauzy clouds weave purple streaks
In magnificent backdrop to mountain peaks

A miracle in music gently occurs
As humanity quietens and wilderness stirs

Heaven is sent in the hour before night
Bathing our world in its peaceful light

© Copyright 2003 june macfarlane - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-09-23 06:30 PM


This is simply lovely - just what I needed to-day. Thankyou for sharing this with us. hugs, Chris

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore



    

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2 posted 2003-09-23 06:31 PM


junemac:  Serene and lovely!  I could picture the scene you were writing about.
Nice work!

Betty Lou Hebert

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3 posted 2003-09-23 06:43 PM


As lovely as a breeze..Very nice to read!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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4 posted 2003-09-24 04:02 AM




June you really put me in seventh heaven here!
This was just sooo good!
I really enjoy your style of writing.
Nirvana, Utopia, and Paradise all wrapped in one.

“A black lace salute to day gone by”

Simply Heavenly!


Richy


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5 posted 2003-09-24 10:44 AM


Junemac,
What can I say?
Beautiful as always..
(and hows your new grandson?!)
Connie
xx

junemac
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6 posted 2003-09-24 03:17 PM


awwwww bles you all i am overwhelmed with your lovely responses to my poem. i am glad you all enjoyed it and it seems to have given out the vibes intended.

thanks again you are all lovely.

hugs june x

junemac
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7 posted 2003-09-24 03:19 PM


hello connie,

thank you so much and my grandson number one is two today lol !!!! my se3cond ( new grandson is two weeks and two days old today lol.

how lovely of you to remember hon. thanks xxxxxxxx hugs xxxxxxxxxxx june

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8 posted 2003-09-25 09:16 PM






(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I always love watching the sunrise and sunset, sweet friend, those two times of day are just an arm reach from heaven! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet June, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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9 posted 2003-09-25 09:46 PM


I think the sunset, like the rainbow, is God's promise for another wonderful day.  You described it beautifully.  Joyce
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10 posted 2003-09-26 10:43 AM


Very pretty, June!
junemac
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11 posted 2003-09-26 01:33 PM


THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR LOVELY WORDS NOAH !

i loved this of yours and wish i had added this to the poem lol

just an arm reach from heaven!


lovewly pic too. how do you do that ?

hugs june xxxxxxx

junemac
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12 posted 2003-09-26 01:35 PM


Joyce and Denise,

thanks for reading this and thanks for taking time to comment and say you liked it.
Joyce i agree its a gift from god every day.

hugs and thanks as ever for all your support

june xxxxxxxxxxx

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13 posted 2003-10-23 04:37 AM


beautiful
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