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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk 
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In the shadow of an archway Stands a single blood red rose Startling in her beauty Where amid the weeds she grows Her deep crimson petals Are cupping her velvet heart Protecting her delicate centre Like a priceless work of art Her head is held majestically Above thorns of deadly warning Awaiting the freshest tear of dew At the break of summer morning Lonely is this beauty Untouched by warming sun Holding back her charms Hidden from everyone Until her gentle prince happens to stop by And tenderly picks her from the dark To love until they die. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
June~ This has just the loveliest fairy tale quality about it~ I so enjoyed the read~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I love your tale of the rose. Joyce |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Very vivid poem. Serene. Beautiful. Thank you for sharing, I love this piece, and it's going in my library. WinterWren |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
awwwww thank you marge, rose and winter wren ( love that name by the way ) i havew just written this one and i am glad you saw it as a kind of fairytale thats what i wanted. love and thanks for your lovely comments. hugs june xxxxxxx |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
junemac: This is lovely and I enjoyed reading it. Reminds me of our climbing rose, called Crimson Blaze, as there is only one perfect, dark red rose left on it. Perhaps a prince will come for it too! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Sublime Truth Junior Member
since 2003-09-13
Posts 24New Denver, B.C., Canada |
Absolutely lovely, I love the way you've crafted the words togethor, bravo! - The Sublime |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
This was absolutely BEAUTIFUL!!!! Great work! ~Jess  "Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it is letting go." -Herman Hesse |
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Maddy vanD Member
since 2003-09-06
Posts 99Newfoundland, Canada |
beautiful indeed...a very clear picture is evoked...good writing!! Maddy |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is just precious and magical, sweet friend, and may that loving prince forever carry her away to eternal happiness! (big hugggssssss) This is a keeper, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet June, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
I’m sure that special someone was lured by the heavenly scent of this maiden beauty. And gently pulled her into his arms, riding toward the first blush of day. Where their budding love blossomed, and forever bloomed... Simply radiant June! Richy |
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gringakiwi Member
since 2003-08-05
Posts 189 |
Junemac how truly inspiring this one was, as they have said before me, a true fairytale! Lovely, Connie. xx |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow |
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