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symphony_of_thoughts
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0 posted 2003-09-10 05:23 PM



Wouldn't it be fun
Wouldn't it be grand
To be able to harness this
This power that lies a myth

Wouldn't it be fun
To move that desk
Slam it to the top
Upside down it would lie

Be able to alter their thoughts
For the good, bad, or insane
Make them question their own being
Unknowningly grant them fear

A revelation could be rumored
With me at the base
Or it could be rumored
With me cloaked for none to see

Uncomprehensible by even myself
I could express to everyone
But somehow never let them connect
Apocalypse would be their thoughts

Many would soon insist
But under it all
I know that it lies untrue
Everyday I think

Wouldn't it be cool
Wouldn't it be grand
To make a revelation
And do it myself

Until then, these powers lie just a rumor
Lost in the space between space and time
Where God lies with watching eyes and patient state
Untouchable by mortal hands and even God

[This message has been edited by symphony_of_thoughts (09-10-2003 05:24 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-09-15 01:44 PM


Interesting write. Not sure that I understand all of it...but...still...makes one ponder life as it is or could be. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul ~
            Emily Dickinson




    

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2 posted 2003-09-16 06:15 PM


Very intricately put...I like it a lot, will take some reading to get the meaning.  But, remembering the first few stanzas, it would be grand to do all those things.  Thanks for the very deep read.  Truly a very well composed symphony to cause thoughts.

          - The Sublime

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