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0 posted 2003-09-09 06:12 PM






The Moon Knows Secrets

The moon knows secrets old as time.
I almost hear the distant chime
Of temple bells, as she awakes
And her nightly journey takes.

She sees whatever darkness hides.
Marks the turning of the tides.
Watches hunters and their prey.
Smiles on those who get away!

Lights a path for lovers and
Beautifies the sea and land,
With her magic, lunar light,
Watching over us all night.

The moon seems cloaked in mystery.
She is more intimate to me
Than sun or stars, because we see
Clearly, her trajectory.

Dark lines showing on her face,
Each and every month, we trace
Patterns as she wax and wanes,
New till quarter, as she gains
Strength and luminosity,
Then shining in full majesty!


Betty Lou Hebert


Published in Poet's Fantasy, 1998

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1 posted 2003-09-09 07:34 PM


BettyLou~
You KNOW I love moon poetry~
You KNEW I'd come and read this~
You KNEW I'd love it~
You KNEW I'd leave you a reply~

But ... did ya' know I LOVE you and Ron ?

YEPPERS !
I DO !


Hi RON~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
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2 posted 2003-09-09 10:02 PM


Yes, I too love this one.  The moon is a favored subject for we poets.  Love, Joyce
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3 posted 2003-09-10 12:20 PM


Dear Marge:  You are right!  I knew you'd read this and I hoped you'd like it!

Ron sends his love!  He always enjoyes these little messages for him.

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2003-09-10 12:21 PM


Joyce:  Thanks.  The moon is so beautiful right now, isn't it?

Betty Lou Hebert

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5 posted 2003-09-10 09:30 AM


A beautiful poem, I so love the idea of the moon knowing all the dirty little secrets of the night.
I wonder why the moon appeals so to poets....perhaps the connection between the moon and madness???? I mean we must all be just a little mad to write this stuff that the world has no time for anymore eh?

Maddy
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6 posted 2003-09-10 01:50 PM


Maddy: Thanks for commenting.  I suppose the moon is mysterious to a lot of people.  It's such a contrast to the night. So brilliant at this time of year too. Whatever it is, it does fascinate us. Fortunately, there are still of us, like you and I, who read and write poetry and enjoy it!

Betty Lou Hebert

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7 posted 2003-09-10 08:40 PM


I have to echo Marge's comments. I love the moon immensely. She has hung there in all her glory and mystery for eternity.

Your whole poem is fantastic, but I love this line ... As I too am always cheering for those who get away.  

Watches hunters and their prey.
Smiles on those who get away!


Hugs and Smiles, Marti

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8 posted 2003-09-10 10:33 PM


Luna always makes me howl....

I enjoyed the read, Betty Lou.

Thanks,
coyote

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9 posted 2003-09-11 12:50 PM


Marti:  I'm right there with you rooting for the prey!  I always dread hunting season and every day I say prayers for the hunted!  

Love
betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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10 posted 2003-09-11 12:51 PM


coyote:  Thanks for your comments.  Glad you enjoyed this.

Betty Lou Hebert

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11 posted 2003-09-14 09:44 PM


Hello Betty Lou

I adore poems about the moon and this one was fabulous.

Take care......Sue

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I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
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12 posted 2003-09-15 02:00 AM


Sue:  The moon has been so beautiful this month, here.  Glad you enjoyed this. Thanks.

Betty Lou Hebert

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13 posted 2003-09-17 02:19 PM


I was at the beach not too long ago and the full moon rose over the atlantic like a giant pale orange.  too lovely to do anything except bask in its beauty. as is this poem...

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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14 posted 2003-09-17 07:01 PM


pegasus111:  I envy you watching the full moon at the beach.  I love the ocean and often wonder how I ended up so far inland. Haven't made it out to the coast for 2 years now. Life!

Betty Lou Hebert

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15 posted 2003-09-17 08:51 PM


Ah, yes the moon in all it's wonder. Love this write. Chris

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That perches in the soul ~
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16 posted 2003-09-17 10:28 PM


Thanks Chris.  Glad to hear you enjoyed this.

Betty Lou Hebert

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(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, the moon has so many secrets to share and there are many we have yet to see as every second reveals less or more light! (big hugggssssss) This is gleaming with beauty, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Betty, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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18 posted 2003-09-20 01:16 AM


Noah:  Another beautiful picture to go with this poem. Thanks for commenting.

Betty Lou Hebert

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