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Brenda Hall
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since 2000-05-30
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Texas,USA

0 posted 2003-09-08 06:37 PM


Daylight kisses the morning dew
Under the azure skies of blue
Tingling nerves awaken to play
Mother nature begins a new day

Time passes and everything blend
The wind is restless until the end
The sunset hugs the skies of blue
Darkness haunts the morning dew

By: Brenda Hall
"the passionate poet"

The windows of the soul,reflect negative and positive images.Correct the negative and praise the positive

© Copyright 2003 Brenda Hall - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-09-08 08:20 PM


Beautiful write...great imagery...much enjoyed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

      ~ Summer can't be over...
   I still have sand in my shoes ~

Maddy vanD
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since 2003-09-06
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2 posted 2003-09-08 11:52 PM


a wonderful write!! conjured up so many memories of dawns and dusks

Maddy
Poetry is not pretty....poetry is real

gringakiwi
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since 2003-08-05
Posts 189

3 posted 2003-09-09 09:26 AM


beautiful write, in fact it inspired me to look a little longer at the sunset tonight!

Connie

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4 posted 2003-09-09 03:37 PM


Very nice.  Joyce
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Member Patricius
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5 posted 2003-09-10 07:27 PM


Brenda:  Enjoyed reading your poem.  each day is precious!

Betty Lou Hebert

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